Harry Potter and The Half-Blood Prince

[Alex]

I'm writing my own version of the 6th book, Harry Potter and The Half-Blood Prince.

New characters:

Alex Vatticon; Slytherin Transfer (:female:), (no she's not me.)

Henry Paisley; Defense Against The Dark Arts Professor

Progress:

Currently working on Chapter One

Note:

This is a re-make of J.K. Rowling's book, so it will contain some or most of her version.


My Crappy (Computer-Made) Cover:



Reveals:

I'll reveal a little about my version, let me find my book first (pulls out a huge binder)


Let's see:

I'll mainly say these four things:

1. You'll be seeing a lot of Alex beside Draco, instead of Pansy Parkison.

2. There's going to be a Valentine's Day "party".

3. Two unexpected things happen at the "party".

4. Alex is closer to Voldemort, than you would think.


Teasers:

Here are some pieces from my story:

The teenage girl stepped forward, pulling out her wand, and pointing it straight at Harry. Harry was surprised, as he had expected Malfoy or Narcissa, but not the girl.

"Now there's no need for that, Alex," said Narcissa, smiling slightly down at her.

"Yes ma'am," said the girl politely, and she put away her wand. She curtsied somewhat, and took to glaring murderously at Harry beside Malfoy, as though she had cared he had insulted Malfoy's father.

[Alex]

(Sorry for the double post, but it wouldn't fit in one post.)

I'm posting an idea I had for part of a chapter of my version of the 7th HP book (mine's called Harry Potter and The Horcruxes Draco's Version. [it continues from my 6th version])

Idea:

"You failed to kill the Potter boy, while you had the chance?" said Voldemort, clearly not trying to disguise the outrage in his voice.

"No sir," said a frightened, seventeen-year-old girl. The girl had pale skin, and light, almost white, blonde hair that fell down to her waist, and cold blue eyes.

There was a silence, then suddenly, the girl was on the ground, screaming, twitching, tears streaming down her face as she was tortured. Although she had expected worse, it still was a surprise for her. A sering pain was washing over her, wave by wave, as she lay there in agony. Voledmort had used the crutatious curse on her non-verbally, and sat and stared at her, a sick smile on his white face. He had no lips, and instead of a nose, just slits for nostrils, and red eyes with small pupils, like that of a snakes.

Another tall, pale seventeen-year-old stood to the side of the torturing. He had a pale pointed face and white-blonde hair. He watched in slight horror as the girl continued to scream in pain. He had a powerful urge to hurt Voldemort, but new better of it. A small tear slowly made its way down his pale face, but he did not know why, and hastily wiped it away.

After what seemed like days to both teenagers, the girl stopped screaming and lay facing Voldemort, her eyes, if possible, were even colder, and hatred toward the thing in front of her etched her pretty face.

"Well, what are you waiting for?" shouted Voldemort. The girl got up as quick as she could, while the boy resisted a strong and strange urge to help her.

"Come on, Draco," she muttered through clenched teeth, as she walked past the pale teenager. He quickly followed after her.

"I expect better out of you next time, Alex!" hissed Voldermort menacingly after them.

[LegendaryMaster]

Not bad for starters! 9/10

[Alex]

Thanks! If you all want updates, go here:

dragonite137.proboards50.com/index.cgi?board=hpavn

and

www.livejournal.com/userinfo.bml?user=alex2893

[iceburg]

Harry Potter and The Horcruxes Draco's Version?......they had another version other than yours?....the 7th book is out?....

[Alex]

No, that's my version, but I'm changing the name.