lisa
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Post by lisa on Jun 30, 2005 14:57:48 GMT -5
I hate to break it to you, but this is a book already. Its not really your story. Its Erin Hunter's. I llike how you changed the clans, but the story should be different. I don't think it will, 'cause you have the same start. Trust me, I know. And, a question. Does creampaw= firepaw?
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lisa
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Post by lisa on Jun 30, 2005 21:10:31 GMT -5
Okay... I guess I can trust you
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lisa
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Post by lisa on Jul 2, 2005 12:55:18 GMT -5
Well, are you going to write anymore?
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Post by Alex on Jul 10, 2005 19:19:24 GMT -5
I'm re-writing the story, because I have a better idea. So no for now.
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lisa
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Post by lisa on Jul 10, 2005 20:36:25 GMT -5
Okay. Why did you delete the clans though? You did some nice work
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Post by Alex on Jul 10, 2005 21:18:31 GMT -5
Because I'm chagning the characters too.
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lisa
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Post by lisa on Jul 12, 2005 15:56:36 GMT -5
Okay... Good luck with that, and, I know I was a bit mean and all, but is there anything I can help you with?
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Post by Alex on Jul 23, 2005 10:22:10 GMT -5
Not really, I'm putting that on holf for now, I'm working on another project.
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